The idea and structure are good, but it terribly lacks colour, and, since th theme is cityscape, I'd say you should focus on a whole city, not on a few buildings. =)

theme is to create a cityscape and not a building.zoom out the camera and place some building blocks around the area and concentrate little bit on texture.textures plays importrnt role in 3d renders.

thanks for good critics. I have added only few buildings on back. If I zoom out more, the red globes on cameras are no more visible. And, in my mind, those red light are ”le clou” of this work. As I says in SBS I prefered to not assign textures and to keep only grey nuances to suggest the monotony of this city. Maybe is wrong but this is my vision about future.

nice idea, it looks like aprison

I understand completely!

I thought it was supposed to be futuristic - this looks like now. (good job)

this is a great entry pitty it is a little off theme. as far as future goes i think your on track but it is the city view that is not meet. good luck , you have time to change it.

Prison was the first thing that came in to my mind when I saw this too. Great mood and lighting

Reminds me of Escher

It looks great, but, the image is supposed to be a cityscape. That means a view of the whole city or from bird perspective... So, just change the camera angle and do some tweaks. =) I'm holding my vote for now =)

LOL, wlado, I have not wings and my cat refuse to take the camera when she jump in trees. You can vote, man, i shall not change a single vertex.There is no camera to view ALL the buildings in a town. So, how many buildings form a cityscape ? 5, 6 maybe 10 or 100 ? And why strictly from the top or side ? To be sure we have nothing original in our works? Finally, a quote from Razor's comment which I love (the comment, not Razor) ”I think some people need to remember that with art, and themes, we should use the theme as a starting point, not a finishing point,”

Why from top or side? Because that is supposed to be a cityscape. =P A view of a city as a whole, or a part of it, not view of sky from the city. Your work looks cool, but really, I'm not gonna fall for few simple buildings that look good because of the camera angle. People here have made whole, structired and detailed cities, they designed them, arranged them.. Get what I'm aiming at? I know you don't have wings. But hey, guess what, you don't have a travelling mashine neither, but still you made something futuristic =P It's not a cityscape, but it's supposed to be. So I suggest fixing =)

wlado, usually I'm very open-mind to any technical, compositional or any kind of artistic critic. But discussions about on/off theme are endless and waste of time. I hope you have the artistic knowlege to do a better critic comment than to hang on this problem like a dog on a dry bone. However, I shall keep in my mind that I found a good camera angle for cityscapes , this is a good beginning for your future critics, GL

interesting change from the usual perspective -- nice work

OK, as you wish..... =)

I like the perspective chosen here. Nice job, author!

this reminds me of that movie called the 7 elements or something like that with bruce willis

right jaescoe, is The ffth element by Luc Besson,, I think of that movie

Good to see things from a different perspective. Good job

Great perspective

I love the 5th element.

Hey! I see Mila Jovovich falling from the sky!! Great job.

yay, something unique You've done a good job author, i don't know how to do 3d but this is my fav in the contest... this is realistic

thanks a lot Missy

Nice! The texture on the buildings is not appealing to me, it's kinda off, but the rest is great! =D

interesting sky colours.. nice work

nice work, very good sbs

Nice image and great use of Bryce! I personally don;t like the green colour around the image, but i asmire the fact that this was done in bryce. Your Step By Step guide is excellent and should be made into a tutorial ASAP!!

Everybody gets their own baseball diamond! Interesting.

I like it. It's as if it comes out of a terminator movie.

Very bleak, I like it

In my opinion it should be a bit lighter.. but good luck!