I love the texture on the cigarette, but the flame looks disproportional to its size. Additionally, that is the only lighter I've ever seen that could light without the button being depressed.
First of all congrats on a realistic image.
1. I realize that you're not a smoker so good for you
2.Every cigarette has lines on the paper so that it would burn uniformous - those lines are actually where the paper is thinner.
Check this: http://static2.bigstockphoto.com/thumbs/1/3/2/large2/231722.jpg or any google image.
3.Flame can have any size but it will have a continuous shape, even if the wind blows, it will just bend without loosing it's integrity. In that position you would burn your thumb
http://www.g-peopleland.com/Lighter%20Flame.jpg
4.There are lighters that don't need the button pressed to light up, but that is not one of them.
Anyways, it's one of the best renders around. You can still improve it, or use this info for another contest.
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This is a nicely finished model, its a little simple in my opinion but thats not really a criticism, i'd just like to see more of your work, see it as a compliment.
Really nice render. This is exactly something that would benefit from additional Photoshop help. If you were to soften the shadow edge a bit and gradually go lighter the further away it gets from the can...I think it would greatly improve and already great pic.
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Where's the Weber logo? This looks incredible!
I actually left it out because I thought the mods may not like it.
very good work author...gl
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