I think this would have been more effective if the type had been constructed from wire, instead of just mounting letters on wires...

The lighting of the text is also inconsistent with the rest of the image, showing strong lighting from the top and bottom, while the environment shows side lighting on some wires, and a weird bright spot with dark corners in the background. A clearly established light source, consistently applied to all elements in the image would have made this much stronger.

The sun in the background does not correspond with the light shining down into the letters. The upper 'e' and 'd' are too light on the bottom and along the inside top, and the lower 'd' is too light on the RH outside (about halfway down) for as low a light source as your background.

MossyB, thanks for inspiring me to recreate this one.

I like this incarnation much better.

Hi there, Author, did you able to add more (20% or 30% Opacity) highlights to edge of the word "RED"? It will definitely give the word more stand out (ofc a little, not too much) from the background.

Good luck on your entry!

Great image, but "Fear" is too hard to read, especially the 'a'.

Edit: Better. The high contrast blue and the lightning are a bit distractive, which overpowered the "cut outs," but you've got them more visible now.

Thanks, On my monitor it is legible.

Very nice tribute, author.