(5 years and 2606 days ago)
Fantastic modelling skills, just a few minor points. The flash seat, should really have had the edges chamfered slightly nowhere is there ever perfect sharp corners on anything. The texture of the black plastic on the front of the camera is stretched and doesn't match the same material on the corner of the camera where the strap loop is. The embossing of the lettering and the lighting is good. The machine turning or knurling on the focus ring is excellent and I love the F-numbers and focus values on the lens barrel. Good job aithor, just a couple of minor issues.
nice one -- texture of the bellows is spot on
sorry i am writing here but where should i write the sbs guide? my render was erased because of that and really nice wood texture there by the way..
Yeah you need to write one. If you want you can just do a minimal one. Showing the basic's. Broken down shots of the individual elements. Including a bit on lighting and composition. Each step needs to have a short description also. Just what you did in that step or what settings you used.
yes but where should i write it? in description? or there is a special section elsewhere....couldn't find it....sorry...i just discoverd this site yesterday and i am a bit confused
found it, thanks for helping me
Nothing wrong with the modelling whatsoever, clean lines and good composition. I have , however one slight criticism. The rendering takes very little advantage of the good model. Somehow the model, despite the great texturing seems plastic, maybe I would re-render this with slightly more subtle lighting and a more definitive shadow map, as the shadows seem weak and unrealistic. I only say this because the model is excellent and the composition is great, more time spent on the rendering settings and maybe a bump and displace on the bellows to bring out the finer textures to add that extra realism.
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