good entry maybe consider to add a little bit of color cause there's a little bit to much wood/ but excellent work anyway!

You should use some reflections on the materials, the models are quite simple, but it's quite ok.

Nice concept and design, the render quality is good too. I suggest less desks and more details (books and pens on the tables).
and the DOF is nice too, Good luck Author.

very good render, i like the high quality of the render and especially the DOF is nice.
maybe take away some desks and show more of the room and add details.
good luck!

If this is really one of your first 3d model than I would like to congratulate.

There are some problems, but if you have less then 50 hours experience this work is the very best.

Let's start with the main problem, this table can not be presented in a simple white or black background render. Here you should put this table near a wall textued with white tiles... it would be much more natural.

I think you used scanline render or maybe mental ray, but you do not checked the shadow option, so your models seems to be levitating instead of being in the table.

If you do not remember something, you should search something similar on google, this is totally legal.

I hade made some major problems in modelling, if you want some advices how to make things easier, contact me.

Best wishes.

Nice job

Good One..

Nice!

I don't really think that your class is thick like this. In my opinion, if I explain your problems, and give some advices how to make better, you learn more, as if I make a comment like above, about how good is.

So I explain why isn't correct this scene, and you should remember my advises in the future.

The main problem is that everything is thick, this could be adjusted easily, just have to notice it.

The second problem is the sharp of the edges, use chamfer tool on every edges that are too close to camera.

Use texture on models, CGTtextures is full of textures of all the genres, and it's free. Nearly every texture has at least a minimal reflection, don't forget this, your floor will be much more realistic with a blurry reflection, under the right window.

Best wishes.