Would be pretty cool if the hair color matched the different textures. A bit too uniform imo. Not wishing to sound rude but it just seems that putting a hair preset onto a bunch of spheres isn't overly creative. I only say this because I feel that if you pushed it a bit more, i.e. changed up the colors, hair settings, etc., you'd receive better scores.

You are totally correct, however, I only had a short amount of time to create this as I was traveling home for the holidays and from home I cannot access the files.

could be, much better