Colourful. Good work. Me think you go for different eyes for top mask. Rest all great. GL

You are right, the eyes left person they are sloppy. Seeing the rendering colours now again without all business stress around, I think there is too much red light influence. Lesson learned take another breath...

I'm giving higher marks for the simple idea that you didn't go 'menacing' or 'scary'. You avoided the trend and thought outside the box. Nice work, author!

You can merge more pictures into one to diminish the number of steps. If you merge 4 pics in one step you'll get to 12 steps, that's 35 less uploads.