good luck author

since the radio is on a slant, you should try and make the words on the screen slanted as well..it does'nt necessarily look like a radio screen, but the rest of the radio is very good

Looks very flat at the moment. Perhaps adding a bit more angle to show the side/top of the radio may add a bit more depth.
Other idea would be to design a scene for it. I know that's a lot of work but I think it would look good.

I take all your comments on board and totally agree I knew i was up against time on this one as the comp was gonna finish!! As i've had 855 views and only 8 votes i won't hold my breath and will try harder on the next one. I'm still new to this and am like a excitable puppy!! . Thanks to the 8 people who voted