My only crit is crowd texture where the seats hit the walls.. and the ball looks slightly too glossy to me. Other than that I think it's pretty good.... good luck!?

No info in sbs for your technique on making the Compact florescent ?
and why are the glass on the other bulbs Black? After all,you did put detail in to the inside of those incandescent bulb.

But other wise nice job

Looks ok, but I'd expect more light reflection in the darker bulbs. Good luck!

I like your render.. Neat... How did you carve the labyrinth?

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Looks good. But the piece that I am assuming is bitten, the broken part is kind of round. I would like to see "teeth" marks in it. Other than that, they look yummy!

Completely agree with DotD, if you can make the bite look like someone actually has bitten in it, it will look real convincing. Now it's more like the shape is part of how the chocolate is designed. Good luck!

Of course you will do better next time! That's the beauty of this forum! We learn from each other and get better! Bravo author.