Good Attempt It always makes your drawing look far much better if where is very little white gaps which have no tone in them.. Unless the white is meant to be light what I'm suggesting is maybe do some cross hatching to fill up the white gaps and get some more shading into it Hope this helps Good Luck!

You're right Toothy...I'm quite new to drawing and didn't want to spoil it by shading in the wrong places.. I'll have a play around with it and see if it's improved. If not I'll leave this one on.

I believe you're allowed to use brightness contrast, levels and other Photoshop tools to enhace your drawing, so that it's black on white, not grey on pink ( unless you chose this effect on purpose). You can also use perspective crop to straighten in up.
Of course, having a scan would make it all easier

Thanks Greymval...this was as it comes from the camera...the lighting was not so good in my lttle back room...will have a look at some more shading and then scan it instead of photographing it.
Cheers

I think you improved and it looks soooooo much better

Nice landscape art..I think this is one of the best creation in this contest..

Thank you so much toothy & 88

cute drawing author...GL

lol :d i lykee this its cute