This is a very good attempt (IMHO).I have some suggestions to make tho.The border in the nose & mouth of the model is not visible (maybe you should direct the light from a different angle to have the whole border of the face).The orange line in the background is not adding to the photo & i think that you should shoot this in a vertical frame to have the whole face of the model in to the frame.Portraits look better in a vertical frame because of the shape of our face (it's "long" most of the times).It's a very good attempt...for real.Good effort ...
jawshoewhah [banned] says:
I think it fits the theme perfectly. Maybe an explanation to how you got this shot would be nice. GL!
author says:
This photography is of a series in which I did a study of a girl's face with a light of a lamppost entering a window. Thank you for your commentaries.
Great mood.
oh wow
simply brilliant.
Thanks to all for your commentaries.
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