Looks really good!

the hand needs more work and maybe see the light source for the hand. GL

This reminds me of someone trying to track another person down from the greeting card... making me think that's unusual.. very nice work in composing the image.

Nice thinking!

neat

Title is confusing, but the image is interesting...

Very creative

great job!!

This was a very difficult source to work with, you did a great job!

very very different.. good luck on this

Yeah! My knowledge of German helped me understand the Dutch! I love this image, too. Very well thought out! Only problem is that the left side of the boardwalk looks flooded rather above the water.

Great job! Are the tips of the black swans' beaks suppose to be white? GL

I wanted to keep the swans as natural as possible. That's why I kept it white. A lot of black swans do have a white top at their beaks. But it's good you comment it, because it looks like it's unnatural. Thank you very much.

Thank you for the comment of the left boardwalk. I edit it a little bit. Thank you both for the great feedback

I really like your idea and the work you've put into it. Very good SBS by the way The problem is, that you squished the face. In step 1 and 2 of your SBS it is normal, but something happened between step 2 and 3. Would be great, if you could fix that Good luck!

its hard to seperate each item in the image. The person looks really distorted, the background isn't straight but that may have been intentional.

Very nice job. Right on the theme! Just add alittle bit more shadows to the grass. Good Luck

I love these Dutch childrens songs!

Thank you for the nice comments. And thanks for the feedback. I added some shades on the side of the island, so there's a bit more depth.

Seems like Beren Botje was sailing for a preeeeeety long time, since he made it to America! Sweet song and funny execution. Good luck!