The breast area is a bit skewed to her left side, but otherwise, this is quite lovely!

hi thanks for noticing...i just make some fixes...hope breast looks ok now???also added sbs.

The "cleavage center" between the breasts is still off-center. It should be matching up with the center of her clavicle above it.
It is also quite flat looking. Since breasts are spherical and extend out from the body, you need some values of shading beneath to give the illusion of form and depth.

great drawings...best of luck

hi thanks to all the comments,it'll help me improved...i will make fixes on the breast area try to make it more look larger though i'm flat chested hihi...kidding!!!

I especially like the accent pieces in the band. Very well done!

If I get any spam titled "AWESOME KIWI WATCHES.. EXCLUSIVE" I'm coming to you author.. LOL.. very well done, and clever

thanks for the compliments...i'm just a newbie and still learning from my mistakes...

A different vision of the rocks. Good luck!

nice theme

I think this is very cute = )

Wow, my little girls fell in love with this picture

Nice concept, but the background leaves a bit to be desired...