Amusing! I like the idea of replacing the uninteresting foggy sky. Replacing the foggy hilltops as well would be more convincing than the pixelated edge you created between earth and sky, however. The rolled up path should not have a shadow along the top edge and the side shadows should be much reduced (note the negligible shadows of the fencing posts). Lorry perspective is off: Draw lines along the outer edges of the pathway to determine the scene's vanishing point. Cut out the side of the lorry and distort it so that its top and bottom edges point to the same vanishing point. Do the same with the top and bottom edges of the text.
The revised text matches the lorry much better, but unfortunately the lorry still doesn't match the perspective of the scene -- specifically see http://www.pxleyes.com/picture/26232/4c8595c077639.html for how the vanishing points don't match up (bright lines good, dark lines bad).
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The "light bulbs" look wonky with dark centers and no mounts. They look like little glowing donuts, and aren't illuminated where the sunlight is coming down.
Shouldn't the light source be more intense at the beginning and successively fading? :P Right now the start of the bridge has less light than the "light circle" a bit behind.
fun Idea author.. YOU MUST PUT ALL YOUR OUTER SOURCES into an sbs to prevent the image from being canceled.. (easy as pie under the MY STUFF BUTTON).. wonderful hurdy gurdy image.. good luck (work on perspective on some of the objects.. distort and perspective works great.. good Luck!!!)
very good effort. Well done. Think the boat adds impact to the picture personally. However I think the boardroom has got a bit lost.
author says:
Thank you for all your comments. I decided the boat had more impact than the surf board, although Surf board would have been more appropriate landing on a boardroom table!
Amusing! I like the idea of replacing the uninteresting foggy sky. Replacing the foggy hilltops as well would be more convincing than the pixelated edge you created between earth and sky, however. The rolled up path should not have a shadow along the top edge and the side shadows should be much reduced (note the negligible shadows of the fencing posts). Lorry perspective is off: Draw lines along the outer edges of the pathway to determine the scene's vanishing point. Cut out the side of the lorry and distort it so that its top and bottom edges point to the same vanishing point. Do the same with the top and bottom edges of the text.
Text perspective of the truck container is wrong.
Fix the shadow on the rolled up path. It wouldn't have a shadow on the right side.
The revised text matches the lorry much better, but unfortunately the lorry still doesn't match the perspective of the scene -- specifically see http://www.pxleyes.com/picture/26232/4c8595c077639.html for how the vanishing points don't match up (bright lines good, dark lines bad).
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