Interesting, but the hunter is hard to see and he doesn't seem to be aiming at any of the basses. The lighting on the bass at 4 o'clock seems opposite that of the background (i.e., from the upper left instead of from the upper right). That bass also needs to cast an appropriate shadow. The even light across the scene makes it hard to know what to focus on besides the biggest element, the central rock formation—but it's not the point of the image.
Compositionally, I think looking over the shoulder of a hunter in the foreground in the lower left corner aiming up the hill would be more compelling.
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The wood floor has the wrong perspective. Where the wood planks meet they should be parallel to the wall. Just select the floor and transform it with the perspective option. Good luck.
The lighting and focus of all three animals looks very inconsistent with the rest of the picture. The skunk is far too blurry and is lit from the top. The rabbit is far too sharp and is lit from the side. The deer is only slightly blurry, but is lit from the back and top right subtly, but too dim for the field...
The bunny also appears to be levitating above the ground, rather than nestled into the greenery...
This is a nice concept, but needs some adjustment.
its like easter for musicians... lol
Interesting, but the hunter is hard to see and he doesn't seem to be aiming at any of the basses. The lighting on the bass at 4 o'clock seems opposite that of the background (i.e., from the upper left instead of from the upper right). That bass also needs to cast an appropriate shadow. The even light across the scene makes it hard to know what to focus on besides the biggest element, the central rock formation—but it's not the point of the image.
Compositionally, I think looking over the shoulder of a hunter in the foreground in the lower left corner aiming up the hill would be more compelling.
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