i had fun with this one, tell me what u think guys

hey, you beat me to it...nice job! GL

You might want to give the edge of the hair a little burn to give it more depth, but that's about all that really stands out for me. GL!

is it possible to reupload if i fix it?

Yes, you do the corrections; then you click "my stuff" - "my contests" - "edit entry", and reupload it (don't forget to check hi res box).

You missed a little bit of the original background on the blue dragon Good luck

oh yeah i did huh lol. i got distracted toward the end, i guess i'll pay more attention next time lol

hey moderators, i didn't realize i needed a sbs till you emailed me. therefore i don't have screenshots of each step, do i need to recreate it for an sbs to keep this valid or is there an alternative i can do this time and do an sbs from now on for other entries?

edit: i did it anyway. i posted my sbs. thanks for voting everyone

You can still clean it up and upload the updated entry. I find myself changing entries long after the original post.

good luck

i quit smoking myself.. but i still believe it's a persons right to choose..

How about let the world make their own damn choice.

well played.... good work....

how about i don't wanna breathe in your crappy smoke. and why would you choose to smoke. theres not a one good reason to start and absolutely no reason to defend it except for the massive loss in jobs if it disappeared. its nothing personal jawshoewhah and westfall, i just think its nasty myself.

i just really don't understand how smoking can be justified and defended in any way. its one of the few products that the only use is destroying your lungs. just sayin.

And smoking harms people that don't smoke but live or work together with a smoker! I embrace your idea, author!

hehehe.. smoking used to be a very ritual orientated event.. only done at times of high worship and the making of peace... (ie Peace Pipe Ritual) ... it was the commercialization of tobacco that took away the spiritual significance.. (leave it to the pastie face white man to ruin a good thing (ack.. I'm one of those Pastie Faces).. smoking actually does have medicinal value... but not the way its been bastardized with chemicals and modernization

The smoke may be toxic... and it is rude to smoke in the presence of others who don't like it.. but in the same right.. taking medicine that passes though the body and poisons the ground water is just as bad (but we never talk about that do we children)

I'm a smoker.. but it's an addiction.. but by smoking it keeps me from.. ahem.. smoking something else.. it also helps me.. err umm.. go to the bathroom (which is much better then taking tons of laxatives LOL) I used to smoke three packs a day... I've gotten down to about 3 to 9 cigarettes a day (packs last me about 3 days now)

and after that diatribe (yes, I do love to yap) please pray for us smokers.. we know it's a disgusting filthy habit.. but oh the smokey goodness.. hehehe

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CSzCyZhFPqo

Lovely SHOOP author..hehehe.. I like the peppermint smoke

To go back to the entry , it was a bit hard for me to see what you wrote (the SBS made things clear). Is it an idea to manipulate the smoke a bit so that the letters fit better on the smoke/ so that you can highlight the letters better? Just an idea . Good luck!

@wazowski - i was going to, but i figured if i made it hard to see it would be a little more subliminal instead of obvious. i like hidden things

GL to you