The two mastodonts are nicely blended, but the perspective of the candlestick does not match with the background. Speaking of that. What is the source of the background?
author says:
thanks background of Mastodon
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Soften the edge of the light beam on the child at right. The shadow should be rotated 90 degrees clockwise to match the light from the bulb. Bulbs on ground would have shadows.
author says:
Thank you, Mr CMYK46. I am in the process of correction
Its a very nice scene you have setup there, but you need to work on some details to make this a winner the daffodils on the right, you need to cut them out way better.. I dont know what you used but you cut parts of the leafs n more. theres a black outline on the flowerpetals aswell. I like to suggest you to use the pentool for the cutout, if you dont now how then heres a very good tutorial for beginners with pentool. http://www.melissaevans.com/tutorials/how-to-use-photoshops-pen-tool/1 page 1 explains the pentool and page 2 tells you bhow to cut out using the pentool. The floor the girl is standing on, remove it and make her feet stand in the sand, also i dont understand what happened to her feet they are all wobbly
The mill arms that are still vissible you can cover up by using parts of the mill with the same structure. copy past and even flip parts that you can use.
If you work on these things then you can really have a nice scene here good luck
author, as Elad has said, you have a very winning concept here, but the Hi Res shows a LOT of detail that will give you low votes, especially from the more powerful voters... the design is FANTASTIC but the detail needs to be refined.. GOOD LUCK!!!
there you go.. is a far better scene now nice job on the mill too to cover up the wings.. the main thing thats bothering now is the cutout of the dafodils they have a black and greyish outline and miss parts in the leafs.
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A bit too blue, the leaves look very unnatural, but a great concept!
like the idea -- find the colurs on the pumkins a bit over saturated -- tone them down maybe or try a different blending mode
Try to rotate the arows' tails (on the arrows that are tail visible only) because they look too repetitive.
Yes, the concept is great!!!
I loved this one!
Good luck, author!
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