nice

I like this line "Rain, rain, go to Spain",
send it to Mqtrf and Mymy!!! You've got 2 angry mods now. LOL

hahahhaa.... @ Robvdn dont say tht... its not my fault its jus a rhym :P

Very nice job! GL

Background figure is too large, and probably wouldn't have a shadow if it's transparent...

You really need to upload a HIGH RES image so we can see the image better.. you've got a great idea here... (High res images get better votes because it helps peeps to see the work) it's a good start.. I can see Lots of potential.. just need to be able to see the work)

EDIT: THANK GOD FOR HI RES... I love confusing weird wonderful entries like this.. now that I can see it.. it's a gazillion times better....

be careful of jewelry... It can destroy an image (In theatre.. you'd be fired if you walked out on stage with the wrong ear rings).... but it is your vision... go for it (masking out the jewelry would be helpful just because of the way it dates the piece.. but that's just me)... (god I am a yapper arn't I? hehehe)

I think this image would have been FAR better without the subject on the bridge! Without it...it might seem simple but very effective! With it...it seems convoluted and distracting. Just my opinion...

Thanks Guys for ur Suggestions, ill take care in future...

I like the idea of the girl in the forground, but I am very confused by the girl on the bridge, or rather why shes transparent.

girl on background is a soul who is in deep pain but she is hiding by her fake smile

The name is awesome! And yes. The ghost thing is too large compared to the bridge and the other girl! Other then that, great job. Good Luck

Which would you prefer, a negative comment, or no comment?

probably no comments as it seems minimal use of source. I would suggest using the source, duplicating and manipulating to make the tree in the background..goodluck anyways, and don't be upset about the no comments, some people don't get any at all.

"Hunie" ? Is that the name of the girl, or do you mean Honey/Hunnie ? And try to make the hand larger. GL

I really like the colors in this.To be frank I like when the source is clearly visible than to look the sbs where the source is used.

What a nice story... And great job on the picture! GL

years back a music video was made based on this story.ur peice completely goes wid tht.superb job.i wud like to see the sbs

lolss.. yeah nehayash it waz Leja Leja.... cool u recognized it.... guess m very much near tht picture+