Nitpick: the lightning on the girl is complete off while the rest works great (with shadows and lightsources...) You might want to have a look at her again (and I mean the shadows and light-fall!)
Very nice choices -- think the transition between the thumb and the handle of the mask needs a touch up -- appears the handle is going thru the thumb not under it -- bit of shadow from the thumb to the handle and maybe extend the handle to the gap between the thumb and finger
yes , yes , yes!!! I love your sources, the dual colour balance on this image works well and although i think your model is more of the focus point for me than the mask you have used the main source creatively and in many places within your image.
That's a great work, especially on using colors. There are somethings that might be helpful to you if you want to improve further: (1) The size of the mask is quite small compared to her face, you can use the distance between her eyes as the standard and enlarge the mask to fit it; (2) The saturation level of the mask is noticeably higher than the rest while the colors of the character are quite muted. If you use the blue filter for the mask, it would fit more to the image; (3) There are many black dots on the image, I don't know your purpose but they are quite distracting. Best work so far!!
author says:
Thanks guys for the wonderful comments @ Langstrum thnx for the tips, am ever learning, you made great observations...strangely i used the distance between d eyes to size the mask...the dots were our of my creativity..but all note taken..Thanks
Nice thinking and attention to detail with the lighting. A nice impact might be to have the main skull shadow be a little lighter the further away it is from the skull...having it be darkest near the skull. Does that make sense? Nice job, author!
author says:
@pixelkid thx for the nice comments, am nt yet an expert on controlling the degree of shadows casted against hard light or soft light...i think your right..i ll work abit on it
Level 20 milestone hehe...Am so proud ov myself.....learning continues....Thanks to the great artist here on Pxleyes, without such great inspirational people, i wont be this good..Thnx guys
Congrats Gaby
rather creepy
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