The fish group still has the border of the photo, could use a little blending.
author says:
You are right James.. it is a fault. but now it is the time for voting only.I can't fix it. sure I will be more care full in future. Thanks for the healthy tips.
It a good attempt, you may want to pay attention to:
a) The area where the water from the frame meets the ground, the darkest area of water in the far center of your image could be taken out, leaving the main body of water. At the moment it's spoiling the effect IMO
b) The water spilling out of the frame might look better coming from the bottom of the frame...
(c) The side frames could use a little depth
(d) As the animals are coming into the room, their 'colour' would become darker (as it's a room)
(e) Some general elementals ie spray... dark wall patches from the water (maybe that's a little too nitpicky) so just water elementals :P
On a side note: if you could find a higher res pic of the dolphins it would really lift this piece!
Goodluck
author says:
thanks a lot JamesD...I made a little changes on my entry with your valuable guidance. i think it is better than before.
you should remove the cracks from the jacket..Nice work
author says:
tanx 4 the comment ....... I did like that first. without cracks on jacket and jacket with that same blue color. then i think just make it like a broken hand of clay. so I changed the color of the jacket and bring back that cracks. once again thanxxxxxxx
tanx 4 the comment ....... I did like that first. without cracks on jacket and jacket with that same blue color. then i think just make it like a broken hand of clay. so I changed the color of the jacket and bring back that cracks. once again thanxxxxxxx
maybe it's a little too dark! and the cracks that lead onto the jacket wouldn't be as connected to the hand as they are at the moment: they would be displaced. otherwise well done!?!.
The fish group still has the border of the photo, could use a little blending.
You are right James.. it is a fault. but now it is the time for voting only.I can't fix it. sure I will be more care full in future. Thanks for the healthy tips.
I really like this. James is right though with a bit more work this could be something very special.
thanks for the comment oziipop. sure I will be more care full in future.
Congrats again shabeebsabu
thank you again madamemonty
Congrats again!!
Thanks again spaceranger
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