The overall composition of this shot is kind of boring, with the mountain in the center of the background dominating the photo and just "sitting there..." It would help the visual movement if you cropped it on the left, so that the eye would then be encouraged to come down the right side to the house at the bottom, then following the ground lines back up to the left side of the mountain to start the journey around the photo once again.
I have to disagree with Mossy B on this one. I would keep it just the way it is as far as compostion goes because my eye went right from the mountain to the little house. To me, the little house in the middle of nowhere is VERY interesting. It is all opinion though and what interests the viewer. The ONLY thing I could say is possibly mess with the curves or levels JUST A HAIR. This is so beautiful to me!!
I wouldn't change the entry either. To me, the eye is naturally drawn to the house as it sits in a brighter patch of grass compaired to rest of the image. Our eye is naturally drawn to the bright parts of an image. To me, this looks like a great place - I could imagine exploring the hills and surounds as a kid ... sigh
To my point of view, composition is excelent, not perfect but excelent, All set a visual game: the river, the house, the mountain, the fog, the green blanket... you can almost smell the moisture.
The picture IMHO is full of cold optimism. Good luck!
The overall composition of this shot is kind of boring, with the mountain in the center of the background dominating the photo and just "sitting there..." It would help the visual movement if you cropped it on the left, so that the eye would then be encouraged to come down the right side to the house at the bottom, then following the ground lines back up to the left side of the mountain to start the journey around the photo once again.
I have to disagree with Mossy B on this one. I would keep it just the way it is as far as compostion goes because my eye went right from the mountain to the little house. To me, the little house in the middle of nowhere is VERY interesting. It is all opinion though and what interests the viewer. The ONLY thing I could say is possibly mess with the curves or levels JUST A HAIR. This is so beautiful to me!!
I wouldn't change the entry either. To me, the eye is naturally drawn to the house as it sits in a brighter patch of grass compaired to rest of the image. Our eye is naturally drawn to the bright parts of an image. To me, this looks like a great place - I could imagine exploring the hills and surounds as a kid ... sigh
To my point of view, composition is excelent, not perfect but excelent, All set a visual game: the river, the house, the mountain, the fog, the green blanket... you can almost smell the moisture.
The picture IMHO is full of cold optimism. Good luck!
Stunning
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