This to me is a bit "busy". I agree... took a minute to figure out where the pen was but maybe if you had a solid background? Keep everything else... just have a solid background. Might work
Have to agree it's busy, the perspective lines go allover, the background, the statue, plant and the book are unnecessary, furthermore I do not understand the candleholder in this which should act like some kind of ink jar.
The idea with the feather, an inkjar and writenpaper is good. Take just those (find some small glass jar which can act like a inkjar) and see what you can do with them. It's just my suggestion to you, up to you if you agree or not
author says:
I was going for clutter and haphazard, as a genius like Amadeus desk would be. Using the candle holder as his ink well, I felt represented his eccentric's, three ink pots in one!
Writing his music was all that mattered to him!
Just my spin on what i was after with this pix!
thanks for your input, much appreciated!
p.s. I had already taken stuff out of this photo when setting it up, to make it somewhat less busy!!lol
The pseudo-ink well/candlestick is interesting, but the quill should be placed to show that the tip really is a pen. This looks like it could just be a feather...
author says:
The ink on the parchment is brown, as it is in the tip on the feather!
I liked the idea of this rusted lock, locked! incapacitated from it's nature. In this case, ice (water), was my trap. Photographed in natural light which provided it's own bubbles, veins, and light show! (5 years and 3371 days ago)
Beautiful shot, lovely title!
Yet I have a doubt: is it a bit oof or not? I cannot make up my mind, some details are perfect, others seem a oof.
thanks for your comments, made me look for a clearer shot,..found one better!
Wow, this is wonderful.
Fantastic!!
How bizare!
A Eucalyptus in the rain!
This is Awesome... Well Done Author
Intense!!
Go the Green & Gold
The S.A. Rugby colors.
The colors are definitely cool.
And congrats again!
Howdie stranger!
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