Toy car... :P - created by trevordsouza7

very Cute!

Icame back to this entry because its so cute and if you use a large soft black brush on the roof of the car to add more shading then the roof looks more rounded first selct the roof tho so you dont have to erase all arround

Thanx a lot coming back was the best way to compliment some1s work....

I made a lil change with the roof hope it's fine now.. :P

looks more rounded now and its still very cute, it made me think about toycars that kids make from tin cans in poor countries

This is a pretty good looking piece of work, I like your creativity and color choices. I think you might want to check the perspective though. Try using the free transform/skew tool. I'm going to hold my vote for the time being. Great effort, try adjusting the perspective a little, I believe that will put it over the top.

Hi author nice idea.
Just a few suggestions.

I think im missing out some shadows.
The "tires" should also cast a shadow onto the vehicle.
Same for the things wich are standing at the front of the vehicle.

I also think the tires wich are on the back side ( photowise; aka the side we dont see ) should be placed more to the front. If you draw the lines you can easely messure out where it should be placed.

Also the reflection could use some work. The tires reflection of the tires wich are on the back side ( photowise; aka the side we dont see ) should be touching the real ones.

to be continued

To do this reflection. You could simply cut the image into a few pieces, use free transform with all the options aviable, to make it look right. The side we as the viewers see, can be one piece, as long as there is no depth. So thepart where u are looking into the vehicle should be another piece, and transformed again. Then you can place them together to make it look good.

It's a pretty difficult task to get it perfect.

I hope it helped you make this image even better.

Good luck.

Thank you all for the valuable comments... they did help me learn a few new things...
i tried making all the changes possible.. hope it's fine now
do let me know if it still needs some change cheers

Cute is right....I just have a (hopefully) helpful criticism.
The perspective issues are being created by the floor being at a different angle than the car. The car persp. is actually 'shallow' while the floor is 'deep'.

If you draw a straight line from the close rear wheel to the same spot on the far rear wheel, then compare it with the line of the floor board you will see what I mean. The floor can be adjusted by either using the perspective transform tool, or by simply squashing it with the transform tool... You know which one is best once you try each....

I hope you take this only as a positive comment and not anything negative.


Here's a pic of that may explain it better....hope I'm not breaking any rules with this.... it just helps explain it better than words..

http://imageshack.us/f/192/toycarcomparison.jpg/

cheers

Your (hopefully) helpful criticism was actually (very) helpful... lol...
Thanx for not only commenting but also taking the time to edit n show me where i went wrong.. I've made the changes, hope it's better now

It just keeps looking better and better

Thanx a lot!!!

The perspective is looking way better.

Looks much more grounded now.... more than happy to help.
The pic I added saved me a thousand words...hahaha.

It does, however, look a bit floaty with the reflection slightly off. May I suggest you move the reflection just up and to the right a tad... it's only a matter of pixels, but it may help; and maybe experiment with reducing the opacity just a little bit... (The degree of opacity will actually be the thing that dictates how shiny your floor is..)

cheers

This "prototype" is looking better and better xD.

thanx again every1 .... iv been lil buzy so couldnt get back in time...

n galian: thanx for tat comment.. i noticed my fault now... but cant edit the entry ..iv made the change here on my file though

cheers

Good luck in the voting author.

I find this a bit cute..nice job author!!
my fav by the way. GL

thanx a lot

Sweet little vehicle

Congrats!!

Congratulations on your SILVER trevordsouza7... keep it up!

cheers.

thanx a lot ppl