Nicely done! Best of luck author!

Too dark, a silhouette effect doesn't work when the main shape is fairly shapeless...And the rain looks more like flying straws - the sharp angles on the ends don't connote "rain..."

very interesting image author...i agree its a different and maybe don't fit in reality but why everything should be realistic. I love colors that u used here, love casual brush moves but IMHO the best part is the rain interpretation...i wish u best of luck

The picture reminds me of a cartoon book! It looks interesting author! Very well done, best of luck!

The rain drops look like amoebas under a microscope - there are no water trails, and they are illuminated oddly...The solid color sky, and the crude silhouette scribble drawing just emphasize the "not really rain-like" effect.
It just looks like something done quickly without much effort, sorry.

I feel like the raindrops were created using the blending options, which is not allowed in digital drawing contest. So, can you give us a detailed sbs if you created raindrops without blending options? or if you have used them, kindly change it otherwise it'll effect your entry.

Oh oops - this is my first entry in drawing and I didn't realise that about blending ...
I'll try red flag my entry and get it deleted.
Many thanks

Nice try author! Don't get it deleted, it is good to try and this is how you learn! Best of luck!

Nice try author! Best of luck!

Really blurry, and the umbrella would be facing the other way if the wind was blowing it as illustrated.

thank you for your comments, I have made some edits

Better illusion, now it looks like the wind caught it!