Too dark, a silhouette effect doesn't work when the main shape is fairly shapeless...And the rain looks more like flying straws - the sharp angles on the ends don't connote "rain..."

very interesting image author...i agree its a different and maybe don't fit in reality but why everything should be realistic. I love colors that u used here, love casual brush moves but IMHO the best part is the rain interpretation...i wish u best of luck

The picture reminds me of a cartoon book! It looks interesting author! Very well done, best of luck!