Not too bad, but the eyes are your weakest point. They are not the same size, not on the same level on her face, and are too far apart, which is because you made her face too big.
Eyes (in general) are one eye width apart from the center of the face. The "trick" of lightly drawing a vertical line down the middle of the head shape, and a horizontal line about 2/3 up from the chin is to help with correct feature placement. This might have helped you with the eyes and nose.

goooooooooood try.....

cool work author...love the lucid drawing moves...best of luck