Live 3D comments - page 10

thanks Chrys Rizzo....

Nice shot... I'm hungry now! Congratulations for first place...

taklu cake mangavi ne khavdav vi padse amne.... 5$ malya ne....

taklu cake mangavi ne khavdav vi padse amne.... 5$ malya ne....

You're so kind, thanx!! ^^

Wow, perfect texture... colors....

dear 1492Design, first of all welcome on pxleyes.com, the winner decided by the average of Vote.

For Example
A and B are too Entries

A get 5 Vote = 45,50,60,30,20
its avrage is = (45+50+60+30+20)/5
so Marks of A is = 41
and

B get 3 Vote = 60+70+75
so marks of B is = 68.333

So entry B will be on first position.

Well done on your win, but please could you tell me why I ( 1492design ) recieved the most votes, but you won. I'm not taking anything away from you, Your 3D work looks great, I just want to understand the rules of the game...

Thank you.

Good render but you can improve this entry by looking at the composition, presentation and use of light. It's a bit dull right now IMHO.
Why not move the plate a bit to the left (rules of third), camera a bit more closer (we don't need to see the whole plate, a close up might be more interesting) and use some lights to highlight some spots.

cool idea with the icing, i have never thought to create it that way, but cool idea from you Good luck.

i meant to spell it that way

this is really good.........

nice job .......?

good job..........

its good but its look like steel pasta

good work author
but you have to add more deatails in fork and cream's drop

good job author...
nice detailing...

Pretty Hate Machine - NIN

Very realistic, great job author.

Looks very yummy, great work!

good job but you can improve this

nice work....good try...

thnx for ur comment, i have updated the image.
thanks..

May I suggest to give the texture of the cake another thought? The color / reflection does not really give the idea of chocolate.

Yes you're absolutely right, I should have put some texture in order to get some refraction.

very good work author, like the refraction of the glass as well as SBS too...

all the best.

Really well done. I particularly like the translucence of the ear piece. Great job!

The lens looks opaque, not clear. Even with a light reflection, something of the background should show through...

texture of the icing looks fine -- but the cake does not really look like cake -- maybe another texture would look better

nice work...☺

Thanx! ^^

For the shadows, if you mean the 2 black parts below the glasses (at the tip of the arms), that are the plastic protections to prevent rubbing your ears when you wear them...

i like the glass,the way you see the written under it.U could smooth more the frame.Also there are some weird shadows on the frame but overall nice job!

very nice

very good job

Fantastic detail.

That would be awesome!

If you want when i have time i can make a detailed tutorial, just let me know

thank you ...not much time...not as finished as i hoped it would be...

Wow, some really nice modeling. Good work!

i'll add the sbs in 30 minutes...

hmm you are right.. Seem I forgot to properly uv wrap the Film body. Fixed now. And it seems I did forget to chamfer the hot shoe. Thanks for catching it. Some time you look at something to long you missed thing.. Kind of like not finding the reading glass on top of your head..

Good job author, I just want to pick up a couple of points with you. The string or strap looks kind of fuzzy, the lighting on the rest of the model is great, but somehow the light doesn't pick up the fuzzy bits on the straps. In other words all those little fuzzy bits would cast shadows themselves. But they don't. I love the texture of the table/wood top, nicely displaced and lit. overall good job author just a couple of things need correcting.

Fantastic modelling skills, just a few minor points. The flash seat, should really have had the edges chamfered slightly nowhere is there ever perfect sharp corners on anything. The texture of the black plastic on the front of the camera is stretched and doesn't match the same material on the corner of the camera where the strap loop is. The embossing of the lettering and the lighting is good. The machine turning or knurling on the focus ring is excellent and I love the F-numbers and focus values on the lens barrel. Good job aithor, just a couple of minor issues.

Nothing wrong with the modelling whatsoever, clean lines and good composition. I have , however one slight criticism. The rendering takes very little advantage of the good model. Somehow the model, despite the great texturing seems plastic, maybe I would re-render this with slightly more subtle lighting and a more definitive shadow map, as the shadows seem weak and unrealistic. I only say this because the model is excellent and the composition is great, more time spent on the rendering settings and maybe a bump and displace on the bellows to bring out the finer textures to add that extra realism.

found it, thanks for helping me

yes but where should i write it? in description? or there is a special section elsewhere....couldn't find it....sorry...i just discoverd this site yesterday and i am a bit confused

Yeah you need to write one. If you want you can just do a minimal one. Showing the basic's. Broken down shots of the individual elements. Including a bit on lighting and composition. Each step needs to have a short description also. Just what you did in that step or what settings you used.

sorry i am writing here but where should i write the sbs guide? my render was erased because of that and really nice wood texture there by the way..

nice one -- texture of the bellows is spot on

There are no light reflections on this, just transparency. It looks more plastic than glass.