Nice try ... though have to say tis a little boring, sorry

agrees

a little OOF

Nice try author

good effort, just a little out of focus.

Nice try but its oof...

agree, nice comp and idea, just oof....

OOF

nice try, but focus could be better.

i am still learning... thats why i am here, because i need people like you to help me become better

Try to figure out the macro setting on your camera.

good reason to be here author. keep trying, and like jawshoewhah says, try and figure the settings on your camera........if you can do this, then it gets much easier........at least your shot is on theme, that is also a good start.

Light source is a little blown out.