A little bit too much flash I think. I think cropping your subject to where she is the only one in the shot would help. Oh and in my opinion (IMO) she doesn't really look like she's that taken off guard.

was thinking that myself..........looks like she was watching the camera as well as munching on goodies...

Mmmm, guys, It was quite a time ago, so I can't tell exactly, was she watching me or not. If you think it is off topic, please give me some time to change the picture.

I've changed the picture. This one is definetely off guard.

Now you have pictures that are similar to each other. Obviously the next one is also yours. Still a matter of opinion but he doesn't really look too taken off guard.

jawsh, about two similar pictures... Sorry, I've realized it when submitting for the contest ended. About off guard... You are wrong, it was unexpected for the boy, and he knew he didn't supposed to take this stuff, next minute after shot he hid this stuff behind his back. This is the fact, and you entitled to your own opinion, of course.

looks kinda miserable to me....lol

looks like he really wants to finish eating

the photo is a little blown out and slightly out of focus.

It doesn't really look like anyone is caught off guard. In fact, everyone in the shot seems quite unaware of the camera.

i agree i was looking for someone in the background or something

haha.. good one nator..
@jawshoewhah: alright.. I'll try to replace the pics i uploaded.. I still have time..

I agree, none of these guys know the camera is pointed at them.......