looks like he is looking straight not up

Hi is too far away to be able to see the expression on his face.

agree

yes too far away.

too light

a little over-exposed

agrees

interesting

Yes, interesting, BUT... "take a portrait of a person who is looking up" Should deer consider to be a person?

really out of focus author, try taking a few shots first and maybe get outside or play with your camera settings. You can replace this you know?

oof and really cropped. I would try another shot at this .

oof.......

Okay,thankz for your comments..this was something i had taken may 4 yrs back..felt like uploading it..so i did..i think ppl should give a commnet which is useful n not which kind of oof's me,or jus say what the above person has mentioned(gawd knows what expression is that by the way)

I think people just told you what was wrong, "OOF" means "Out Of Focus". And I have to admit that your picture is totally out of focus. Nothing is clear on it. More, you cut the eyes. Please don't do this again.