Nice picture, reminds me of the old Charlie Chan movies, spelt 'Eastern' wrong though...

Thanks, fixed the typo.

nice idea, but too many 'modern' elements in it!

Nice shot.....good luck to you!!

Good luck author, well taken

Nice. Need that hat brim pulled down a bit more, and the cig dangling a little ( a'la Bogart)

Lovely, best of luck author

......not according to the little one eating, they appear to be quite happy.....but I would look out for the shifty looking character behind you.................

I think if you crop it so the child is out, it could look like people are nervous about something/someone over to the left. But the kid makes it lose its film noir "edge"

I thought about cutting the child, but it would loose to much of the image, and even in a film noir, there would be 'innocents', totally unaware of what is going on around them.

Well, it's your picture, of course. But I think if you cropped off the right (the kid) and the top, you'd increase the tension about a million percent.

Mark, You are so often, quite right. The change has been made.

Personally, I like it. That guy behind the lady doesn't look happy... and WHAT'S he hiding in his left hand, behind the woman's head?! Good Luck

much better, well done.

great shot, gl

Well done author, best of luck

it's really noisy.

I added film grain filter jawsh

gl

Best of luck author but in my opinion, just an opinion, you added a lot of noise maybe a little less would be better? Best of luck for sure, lovely shot!

and the name badge shouldn't be there.........far too modern!...imo.

Good luck

Thank you guys for your comments.
Sure I'll pay more attention to the details and quality next time

Interesting shot, but not really film noir

... clean film?

sorry author, have to agree

gl

Well I don't know!!! It look cool, best of luck