very nice thought......

Thank you. I had some hard time figuring how to make the picture inside my head into reality.

Quite funny entry, well done

The idea just was inside me...I couldn't resist and had to take this shot at the middle of the night.

Thank you.

Good one

well done

Either shot by a fellow Aussie (or someone with some foreign currency) . Very nice shot.

Personally i would set this up differently.
A landscape frame with the warehouse filling it all (the car leaves the impression that she is not totally alone) & the couch with the model far away from the camera (not very far...just as far as it needs to show that she is kinda small/alone/helpless in all this emptiness).
All ways following the rule of thirds (placing the couch & the model in proper position).
I don't know if you have the equipment to take this shot on an other time of the day (external flash f e ),but it would add a lot to the feeling you want to impress.

Thank you for your critique, karaflazz. I value your opinion. I could go out and re-shoot but the model is not always available. Plus I uploaded this from a bar last night and couldn't make any edits. I hope this has improved the image.

Aw...
You crop it too much my friend.
At least the car is gone!
GL.

Guess better luck next time

Wow, didn't expect to make it to the top 10. hmmmm

Weel composed

Very well done

well done

Nice shot, the dull colours help with th effect. You even managed to include the black backpack!