You should have cropped out that black bar but there is really a lot a grain and noise in this shot.

the white candles are too light, you can't see the wicks, took me a while to figure our what I was looking at.

A contrast adjustment or even a bump up in color saturation would have greatly improved this photo.

Cool idea... just a tiny bit over-exposed

Exposure looks fine but it's really out of focus.

nice shot

The image is great, and I love the sound that comes from it...

It's a unique entry but slightly OOF, especially in high res.