How much did you pay them to pose for you? (just kidding!).
Lovely shot!

I promised each of them their very own french fry

Lol - they will probably phone a friend to join them

I feel as though part of the image that should be showing is missing, yet at the same time maybe the left wall is showing too much. Nonetheless great find, I love these types of buildings that spark an interest of what could be left inside.

Great shot

I love old buildings and this one is amazing!

a lot of color here.

It appears you have a dirty sensor. There's a couple smudges in the sky on the right and the left. I would look into getting it cleaned. Some places charge to do it but you can also do it yourself. For future reference, you can use the healing brush in PS in your entries.

Thank u jaws, i have just put one in to be serviced, so when that one come back will put the other in, couldnt cope with no camera at all, lol

Too much flash. Most cases, flash will just ruin the shot. I think you should have taken it during the day.

Any contrast or saturation adjustment would have helped.