This to me is a bit "busy". I agree... took a minute to figure out where the pen was but maybe if you had a solid background? Keep everything else... just have a solid background. Might work
Have to agree it's busy, the perspective lines go allover, the background, the statue, plant and the book are unnecessary, furthermore I do not understand the candleholder in this which should act like some kind of ink jar.
The idea with the feather, an inkjar and writenpaper is good. Take just those (find some small glass jar which can act like a inkjar) and see what you can do with them. It's just my suggestion to you, up to you if you agree or not
author says:
I was going for clutter and haphazard, as a genius like Amadeus desk would be. Using the candle holder as his ink well, I felt represented his eccentric's, three ink pots in one!
Writing his music was all that mattered to him!
Just my spin on what i was after with this pix!
thanks for your input, much appreciated!
p.s. I had already taken stuff out of this photo when setting it up, to make it somewhat less busy!!lol
The pseudo-ink well/candlestick is interesting, but the quill should be placed to show that the tip really is a pen. This looks like it could just be a feather...
author says:
The ink on the parchment is brown, as it is in the tip on the feather!
Hope not, rules say picture should show only one pen. I assume pencils are something different. Agree?
Googling on pen, doesnt show me one single pencil
I've always love how these kind of pens look like. It seems like the part(I don't know what it's called) is already art itself. When I was young I wanted to write with these kind of pens simply because I like the way they looked.
The black background was a good choice. It helps by hiding the pen a little, but not too much and makes the picture appear little more mysterious than it would have been with any other background I can think of.
beautiful
awesome clarity!
Nice focus and DOF
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Thanks for all the votes & nice comments everybody!
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