I like how the reflection is in focus but the areas around aren't

Nice one, would crop a little top & bottom imo..

Thanks , I'll try

I would look to crop out most of the bright grass and fence at the top, and most of the foreground at the bottom. Also, you could up the contrast a little, it will give the pic more depth.

better now?

This is fabulous! Nice job!

Great catch! Crop looks excellent!

Might be my monitor, but the dress looks like it has a tiny bit of a yellow twinge to it

actually it was a yellowish dress, though not at all yellow)

Nice, but maybe have it cropped so the reflection isn't so centered

No cropped, just wrong framing