Too dark....

Its supposed to be dark. I set it up that way. Actually I put my finger over half of the flash so only the top would have light.

Experimenting is good, but I don't think it worked for this photo. good luck.

Thanks for the feedback friiskiwi. I was making an attempt at something like this one: http://www.pxleyes.com/photography-picture/4d54612ca8f49/my-precious.html
I don't have the experience or any equipment for such a professional look but figured I'd give it a try. If you have any suggestions I would more than appreciate them, always open to learning from someone with your talent!

I don't know. There's a little bit of noise on top, but I basically like the lighting and effect. It was a good attempt. Keep trying to get it a little more refined

Thx kyricom!!!!

It's a good attempt but I think more lighting on the camera would have made this shot better. Still I see you are getting better.

Thx lots jaws! I am working harder at this than I have just about anything else I've ever done!

I would have liked more focus up front but that's just IMO...

I agree

nice shot author...great depth IMHO...gl