Nice photo, but you really have to submit a High res if you hope to get high votes.

Also I thought this is about fashion, and I think this one is a little too much of a portrait, sorry.

Very cute girl...

beautiful outfit and a beautiful little girl

What a cutie, just wish you had a different background, either totally plain or something interesting.

very cool shot author...gl

I agree with friiskiwi. If you had moved her over to the right (or her left) you probably could have had an all white background it looks like.

I like the idea, but the shot, imo, is too busy with background. The large bright area to the side of the model throws the image off balance, and takes your eyes away from her.

yeh, much better..........

Very very nice shot author...i like your perspective in this contest...clap clap for that...GL

can I give a suggestion? For women/men that are not super skinny, it is best to have them lift their chin just a tad and bring their neck out just a tad. It may feel uncomfortable for them to bring their neck out like a giraffe (not really that far, but to them it feels like it) but it helps with double chins and makes them look thinner in that area. Especially for this model, it would have been good because she has large breasts and with her chin down that far, it looks like she doesn't have much of a neck. Hope that makes sense

Very nice, but need the all of the feet to be included.

What feet?

Great pinup, but would it be on the cover on Vogue or similar magazines? Not trying to be negative, great shot.

I have to agree with Friski......

IMO, fashion photography is limitless. There is a great variety of extremely creative high fashion images. The pin up is a style and I found plenty of photograpghs out there that utilized this style. Found when I searched vogue + pin up.

I have to agree with Kyricom when it comes to the feet. You have left plenty of empty space above the model, but managed to trim her toes off.... There is nothing wrong with cropping, but it needs to be done thoughtfully. This looks like an accident, this happens, just keep that in mind........

Agree with Kyricom and adeincyprus

agreeing about the feet. a shot like this (being a pin up that is) should include the entire package.
also... i'd consider bringing up the blacks. right now they seem a little washed out and noisy. which i'm sure you didn't intend.
and vogue...right, well they didn't do much with the classic pinups, more with catwalk style fashion. actually, it would be a great shot for a rebel rods mag if you had posed in front of an old roadster.

Yep, need the feet.