The lighting looks a bit odd - The tones are too warm, overall - she looks like she's been into the spray tan too heavily, and the contrast of the lighting makes her cheek area look almost "blown out" bright...

sweet

Well MossyB! All made in purpose, I took the shot with no flash to make her face look like Chocolate, she is at the end my "Little Chocolate Love"
But thank you any way!

Friiskiwi, you are the sweetest person ever! Thank you!

I love the tones here. I see nothing wrong with them. My only concern is the focus but the tones are great and the framing is awesome. The idea to get that chocolate look was a good idea and nicely executed! Very pretty girl

Thank you Nator! She enjoyed every second yesterday being my model!

Thank you MnMCarta! Because I did not use the flash I think the focus was a little off!
I appreciate that a lot! Thank you again for your lovely comment! She is my sweetheart!

Great shot and love the idea to use the chocolate as "make up" It would be a great photo if the focus not a little bit off, or probably taking another round of photo and chocolate session as she enjoyed it very much Probably making the "cat" make up? And pre-focus and tripod would help as I assume, it's low light environment

Yes Riady! Thank you so much for your advice, much appreciated!
I wish I could re-shoot but she is down with the flu now, maybe when she feels better I will take your comments in consideration and make another shoot project me and her!

That's a cute little chocolate lover. I like the lighting and the tone myself. Nice picture equals nice vote.

Thank you lchappel! Much appreciated!

Reminds me of the scarecrow in the Wizard of Oz - cute

Yes fallingHorse lol, thank you so much!

Nicely done author! Looks good!

Try lightening it a little and warm up, eg. increase reds, at present it does not look like something I would like to eat.

I did try to make amends, friiski, but, well...

Yummy black chocolate! My favorite!!!! Now it looks much better author with cutting the edges you gave it a unique taste too!

That is looking better, but still a little too green, if you go to My profile, and look at my albums, I have uploaded some screen shots on how to improve the colour cast using curves.
The photos are in the wrong order, but numbered 1.2.3
good luck

I do agree with Friiskiwi suggestion to remove the colour cast. At the moment, it's a bit greenish. When the colour cast have been removed, the idea of showing inner side of the chocolate would be a great concept

Thank you, JoeCacia and riady. I'll give it a try, and let us hope it won't tilt toward... reddish

You are certainly working hard on this one, got rid of the green but too much magenta, try a Hue/Saturation layer and reduce the Magenta.

Oh yes! I love these! Great shot author!

Hershey's!!!!
I am not a big fan of Hershey's but you made this shot looks soooo good! Well done author! Really clever!