The lighting of the upper left hand corner and along the top is problematic because of the high light reflection on the woven area on the left, with the crop on the right at the very edge of the plate. The fork is not visible beyond the tines, so you should crop the left side over to the plate more, and reducing the woven area by about half, and bring the top down to the edge of the bananas ( ? ) to get rid of the empty space and bring the focus more onto your subject.
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thank for taking time on my entry, I thought the woven thingy and the fork would add further interest.
just uploaded a different shot.
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My favorite Cafe Express meal, Bacon, Lettuce & Roma Tomato classic BLT with thick bacon on 9 grain wheat bread with mayonnaise and sweet potato fries on the side! (5 years and 3019 days ago)
If you are ever down South (USA). This is the breakfast of champions. HOMEMADE from scratch biscuits and gravy. Hominy Grits, slice of cured ham and red-eye gravy. (5 years and 3019 days ago)
Gordon Ramsay would complain about the spilled red-eye gravy, but other than that, this is utterly yummy looking - even though I can hear my arteries hardening just by looking at it...
The flash reflection at the bottom center is the only thing hurting this otherwise well done photograph.
All the crumbs from the rough cutting make this a somewhat less than mouth watering presentation, although I could imagine it (cleaned up) on a food magazine cover.
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The lighting of the upper left hand corner and along the top is problematic because of the high light reflection on the woven area on the left, with the crop on the right at the very edge of the plate. The fork is not visible beyond the tines, so you should crop the left side over to the plate more, and reducing the woven area by about half, and bring the top down to the edge of the bananas ( ? ) to get rid of the empty space and bring the focus more onto your subject.
thank for taking time on my entry, I thought the woven thingy and the fork would add further interest.
just uploaded a different shot.
Howdie stranger!
If you want to rate this picture or participate in this contest, just:
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