There is nothing to tell us it's at night, Nice shot, but I would have cropped it closer to show what the kids are doing.

That's better, really puts the focus on the children.

Lovely pose, kids and surrounding, but I do feel you could have done so much more with what you had at hand.

I agree this is better, you have cropped it closer so we can really see the girls faces but you haven't lost the lovely surrounding.

Not really focussed. Generally it's always better to aim to the eyes of a person or an animal. As we see it, you should have make the focus on the dog's eye.

So sweet moment!

Artifakts is right about the focus, but it's still a really cute shot