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Really nice looking photograph.

This looks like a picture of 2 conflicting things to me, the ice cream is all out of focus and the candies at the bottom are tack sharp. I think if you had either gotten in very close for a picture of the candies or focused on the center ice cream bowl.

ooooooooo, I bet I could eat a TON of those!

Nice shallow DOF! I do think the top right and bottom left of the composition is a little distracting. Maybe if you moved the camera more to the right to get the out of focus treats as your background?

I love the idea here! I think the left side of the frame isn't adding anything to your composition. Maybe if you had moved in really close on one of the flowers this would have been a potential winner.

Looks like on camera flash to me. Not a flattering light for a food shot. Available light from a window with a sheet over it would give a much more natural look and allow the background to have some more detail.