Beautiful. Much improved cropped, etc.

I think you are supposed to show both images here;
"showing the original image taken directly from alongside the finished processed image"

I'm not the moderator, but why not just put the two photo together and replace this one?
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My Entries, find this one and Replace image. No reason to remove the SBS.

Yes

I have replaced the image.

The SBS is really interesting, but I think you need to show the 2 images together here;
"showing the original image taken directly from alongside the finished processed image"