You have totally captured these children in their own world of bubbles, spontaneous photo and the child in the background is supporting the main character. What do you think if you cropped a bit more at the left to eliminate those dark hard lines that take our eyes out of the frame?
You worked at this image, it is not a photo taken, it is an image made. Do you know that when you place a circular object into a perfectly square format the image strengthens and the reason is because the natural pathway of our (western) eye is to read around and with the sides being equidistant from each other the eye bounces off the sides and back into the circle. Try it for fun and you will see what I mean. Y'see with a rectangle it is natural for the eye to read along the longest line, we read from left to right and then out of the frame. You want to keep our eyes inside of your photograph for as long as possible. I like the concept of round cork tops in a round circle.
author says:
You're right. I consideret that the frame is composed by the borders of the photo. Thanks for yours suggestions, as allways your comments are useful.
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I am totally taken with that shadow within the circle, what a catch! This is a very exciting image and the colour palette with blues/magenta and purple predominating gives a cool and quite feel but that circle spakles with yellow excitement. Good one.
author says:
Thank you
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Brilliant, you caught two people walking by and that shows us the massive scale of this triangle. Had you stepped back a few feet you could have caught the entire structure without amputation. Interesting and well done to have kept that little slice of building at the R of the frame for because of it's presence we can see the horizon line is straight.
author says:
thanks still for the comments,actually there was a car there,so had no choice with that corner
You have totally captured these children in their own world of bubbles, spontaneous photo and the child in the background is supporting the main character. What do you think if you cropped a bit more at the left to eliminate those dark hard lines that take our eyes out of the frame?
Great suggestion. I did that and it works well!
What a cute little girl. Great shot.
YAY YAY YAY looks much better
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