I really like the layout. There's no question what the product is used for. I'd like more clarity in the product itself since it's very difficult to read the labels. Also turning the top jar by even 30 degrees would draw the eye in more.
I was trying to read the label on the front glue stick and would have preferred a sharper image at the front. Still the creative dof is present and the image looks as if you worked hard to present us with a photograph made, versus a photograph taken.
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Thanks, still. I see your point. I actually played a lot with dof here to purposely have only the product name in focus. I didn't want people to focus on who the distributor was. But I get that this can be distracting as well.
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The items are well displayed as a group. However, in an ad campaign where you are trying to sell the item, we need to see what the detail on the apron looks like.
Merry Christmas to you too! From the well saturated colour to the message the product is clearly seen in abundance. That is an expensive item for 10 Euros. Your photograph has good impact with sharpness well rendered and natural formating with good marginal space.
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You succeeded in making me hungry! I'd consider unwrapping the first one so that we can see both the mouth-watering detail and how it arrives packaged.
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I really like the layout. There's no question what the product is used for. I'd like more clarity in the product itself since it's very difficult to read the labels. Also turning the top jar by even 30 degrees would draw the eye in more.
Thanks for the comment.
Artistic, caught my eye.
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