Sharp on the eyes GOOD. I do think a bit of skin softener would enhance this beautiful face. I can feel my eyes fighting between her eyes and those teeth back and forth and back and forth. Nice dof and the pose is very comfortable. Crop is appropriate with marginal space.

Thanks for the observations. The image was pre-advice earlier about skin softener. I also wondered whether the image was just too bright. I think I have a tendency to overcook adjustments a little.

Nice face and nice pose but the focal point is the end of her 'pony' tail. It makes the rest of the face softer but the eye is drawn away from the prime area which is the face.

This is a very nice catch however it is blurred and out of focus. When shooting portraiture it is imperative to have sharpness on the eyes, then all other sins are quickly forgiven.