a pipe svarowsky - created by lincemiope


a pipe svarowsky
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avatar karaflazz
karaflazz says:

I don't know what are you shooting with author but you clould work a little bit with the background & lighting.They are not flatering your subject (imho always).You have some "hot spots" & some "nasty" shadows that doesn't add to the photo.Try to light your subject with a "softer" light source (use a sheet in frond of your light source to diffuse it)The background it's ok (a solid colour surface) but the folds aren't good.Try to use a piece of paper or something.Over all it has alot of potentials to become better(imho again).Hope i helped with this tips (as an amature i try many things my self)

author says:

@ karaflazz... thank. very very gentle

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

I think you just used too much flash.

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