author, i love the perspective of this photo..but the cigarettes i think should be more visible. imho.

First match, the enemy sees you, second match, he takes aim, third match, he fires. great idea, but the iamge is a little hard to make out.

nice job, thanks

Much better than the original, now you have a clearly visible subject which shows great lighting

Question is why is the person smoking three cigarettes at once! I suppose he could have friends. Good execution! GL!

I like this better than the original. Good one

This looks a lot better than the original! Good Job!!!

Congrats for another second place!