Danger is around the corner - created by friiskiwi


Danger is around the corner
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avatar adeincyprus

......not according to the little one eating, they appear to be quite happy.....but I would look out for the shifty looking character behind you.................

avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

I think if you crop it so the child is out, it could look like people are nervous about something/someone over to the left. But the kid makes it lose its film noir "edge"

author says:

I thought about cutting the child, but it would loose to much of the image, and even in a film noir, there would be 'innocents', totally unaware of what is going on around them.

avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Well, it's your picture, of course. But I think if you cropped off the right (the kid) and the top, you'd increase the tension about a million percent.

author says:

Mark, You are so often, quite right. The change has been made.

avatar kyricom
kyricom says:

Personally, I like it. That guy behind the lady doesn't look happy... and WHAT'S he hiding in his left hand, behind the woman's head?! Good Luck

avatar adeincyprus

much better, well done.

avatar dollmommy
dollmommy says:

great shot, gl

avatar JoeCacia
JoeCacia says:

Well done author, best of luck

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