Tiny toys machine - created by jerostone


Tiny toys machine
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avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Um, no offence author, but usually when you take a shot like this, it just lacks the artistic point of view. A photo like this is more like documenting, as is you were gathering evidence for a crime scene. My suggestion is try re-shooting but do it from different angles.

Once again author, I'm not trying to discredit you but suggest a better way to make the subject more artistic. GL!

author says:

Dead right, jaws! Altogether flat and insignificant! I just took the pain of going downtown and having this thing photographed, then stupidly enough I thought it wise to upload it here. What's fair, is fair

avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Ok, so this time, go back downtown (not today but whenever) and this time try to get a focus on a slot at different angles. Shoot looking up. Shoot looking down. Try to focus your subject to the left or right of the frame and create a rule of 1/3rds would be a good idea too, especially if you can get people in the background actually using the machines. I just figure, if you are down there, you mine as well shoot it at every angle you can think of.

Still holding my vote. GL!

author says:

OK, I'll give it a try, providing the convenience store lady won't chase me away.

avatar rbsgrl
rbsgrl says:

Good advice! I know I have been helped tremendously by advice from Jaws and others on this site.

avatar erathion
erathion says:

cool shot author...gl

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